In my writing, I did well at making an introduction, telling the readers what it is about. I also used a number of similes and metaphors to describe Juliet so that it is easier for the reader to imagen what she would looked like.
To improve my writing, I need to make sure that my spelling is correct and I need to use more complex punctuation. I also need to stick with a character description and make sure that I don't start to write a story instead.
This is what I wrote:
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